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Malqua

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  1. I like it. Is this a solo project?
  2. "Alright, let's go!" I say with exuberant exhilaration. //Just as Malqua starts the walk with the girl and the village leader, the other knight pulls him aside.// "Listen, we'll raze this village tonight, and we'll be out of here before sunrise." he says with malevolent intent. "But we don't need to, the people seem nice, with the exception of the entryway guard, she scares me. But you know this isn't our mission. We need to get back to our caravan, these people shouldn't suffer." I say, eyes gleaming intense with passion. "You don't want me to kill you too, do you?" (I've been typing this for two hours, someone else pick up here )
  3. "We were separated from our caravan, We were supposed to be headed up into the mountains, but, well, here we are..." the knight replies abashedly.
  4. Ahh yes, the blonde-short haired version of the same thing. :3
  5. Not-Granted, King of the Hill already exists. I wish I had a new PSP to replace my old 404'd one. (KHBBS bundle pl0x)
  6. //Malqua, the devilishly good looking knight in shining armor, is idly chatting with another ironclad warrior.// (Original name and short descriptions FTW)
  7. I accidentally your child. My hill.
  8. granted, your super intendant dies and you're blamed for it. I wish there was a way for me to get IRC or Skype Chat on my PSP.
  9. "They won't see it coming" & "Coming soon" I think I see it coming...
  10. Granted, you've turned into Bruce Lee. You die later of a "Prop" accident. I wish for a lot of scene/emo girls around my age
  11. Yeah, this is just a story I wrote in my spare, trying-to-sleep time. I wrote it on my phone, which only allows 1,000 characters per page, so I decided those to be my chapters. I've been getting a lot of sleep recently, so I haven't been working on my story as much. This is how far it's come in only like, 8-ish hours of writing it. Anyway, if I get more written down, I'll update this post.
  12. Chapter 1: I awoke suddenly in the center of a seemingly endless world, covered in water and mountains. I search around me to see if I had anything I could use to defend myself, but there is nothing. The next thing I think is shelter, I search around for a while for an abandoned house or a cave, but no such luck. Seems like I would have to create my own shelter. I have no tools, but the things in this world seem weak; I do my best to break off a part of a tree for lumber. Finally I remove a piece, a whole section of it's trunk, and to my astonishment, the tree remained floating in the air! I continued gathering wood until I couldn't carry any more. I set out to find level land so I can construct my shelter. After a while, I had a roof over my head, and as it grew late and dark, I could hear things outside. I thought it was safe in here, but suddenly the sound was inside. It attacked me with overpowering force, I did my best to fend it off with my bare fists, but I couldn't hold out. I faded black. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 2: I awoke suddenly in the center of a seemingly endless world, covered in water and mountains. I thought for sure that I had been killed that night, but I assumed it to be a dream. I follow the same path my dream laid out, the trees were different though. My path led me to an abandoned house exactly like the one I built in my dream. I soon realize that I had died that day, that all the things I had changed in the world remained. I also determined that the harmful creature that came after me only did so in the darkness of night. If I wanted to protect myself, I would need light. I went outside to gather more wood, closing the door behind me. I saw various beautiful creatures, completely harmless, all though their naivety would only benefit me in the future. I returned home to begin crafting some basic tools I would need: A workbench, and from that I created a pickaxe, a hatchet, a shovel, and some chests for storage. I ran outside quickly to get coals before nightfall. The light is safe. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 3: I wasn't bothered last night because I had set up the torches. I guess it's true that the monsters don't like light. My wooden tools aren't very efficient, I need something more powerful. Rock solid equipment should hold up more, and get the job done faster, allowing me to make more use of my day. I went out to get the materials, bringing along the wooden sword I had made during my restless nights. After a few hours and collected slabs of rock, I decided to look around for a while before returning home. I was searching for signs of intelligent life, of anyone other than me, or anything I could use to make life easier. No such luck. I passed by some pigs on the way back. I figured I would need to gather food soon, so I drew my sword and attacked. Raw meats would do nothing but get me sick, so when I got home I built a furnace out of the stone I collected, using coal for fuel, and got to cooking. At the same time I made my stone tools and got ready to retire for the night; Try to sleep. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 4: I woke up in a most unpleasant manner. It seems a cow had found it's way into my house while I was asleep. I kindly showed it to the door, and as I stepped outside I noticed something I hadn't before. A small cave in the side of a mountain off in the distance. My inner curiosity sparked, I grabbed my tools and went on towards the cave. The cave entrance was wide, but the deeper the cave went the smaller and darker it got. I laid out some torches as I traveled through, spreading light all around not only so that I could see, but so that I could make it back out without getting lost, or worse, attacked. The darkness of this cave is perfect for the creature that attacked me. I came to two seperate paths, from the left I could hear the tricklings of water, and the right was bountiful in coal and iron ore. I couldn't know for sure how much time I spent exploring that cave, but I had a feeling that night was approaching. I followed my torches outside, getting home quickly. Can't stay long. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 5: As the sun rose, and the animals outside became more lively, I prepared for another cave dive. I went through to the forked path and turned right. I dug out some iron ore that I could smelt and refine to make various useful things. Still ever curious, I also continued down the resource wrought passage until I reached a large drop to another level of the immense cave. It was far too high for me to jump down without injuring myself, and even then I wouldn't have a way back up, so I turned around until I could safely lower myself into the chasm. Along the left path I found nothing but sand and water. Much further down though, I couldn't help but notice the faintest glimmer of an off yellow color embedded in rocks above a deep pool of water. It was within reach, so with extreme caution I decided to extract it from the rock. Almost instantly, water came like a raging torrent from the cieling, as if the whole ocean had been dropped on top of me. I was pushed deep into the pool without air. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 6: I was rushed to the very bottom of the pool. Without air, I found it difficult to fight my way back to the surface since the water never ceased to flow from the cave ceiling. My mind raced, I thought about how that if I had just gone home that I'd be all right, not drowning underneath oceans of water deep within a small cave inside the side of one of many mountains. Furiously kicking my way up against the current, longing for another breath of air, I thought of the meaningless things I had done since I awoke on the shore. What if I die here? What if there were people looking for me, just as I was looking for them? If I die here, their search would be fruitless. Closer to the surface, but struggling not to inhale water as I make my way up. If I find someone, they might know how to get out of here, they might know a safer place. I would have to survive this before worrying about other people, though. With my final bit of strength, I lunge for the edge, grabbing rocks to pull me up. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 7: I practically flew out of the pool. The air I then tasted was the most delicious and satisfactory that I ever breathed. The fear of death made living a reward in itself. I quickly escaped the cave, returning home to rest a long while after the ordeal I had just been put through. That night I slept the most peaceful, restful, and long sleep anyone has probably ever known. The next morning, I awoke in the world I had before taken granted, but never again. That day was the most beautiful I had ever experienced, all the colors were much more vivid, the animals more wild, natural, and the sky more amazing. After my own little celebration of life, I went back to my little cottage to smelt some of the iron I had barely made out alive with. I crafted tools much more powerful and durable than my current ones. Tomorrow I had a new plan: Search for other people. Preparing for that, I gathered all the lumber I could find, packed up my gear, and retired for the night. It was another peaceful rest.
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