Axel Posted May 14, 2012 Share Posted May 14, 2012 This is where I will be posting all of my poetry for the community to view it, comment, and enjoy. I will post my poems from my older to newer work. So this one here is my very first one, that doesn't have a title. ________________________________________________________________________________________ "There has to be a way. Can anyone hear these words that I say? If only there was a way.. A way to finish what had to be done that day. The troubles we've had are now tumbling away. Tomorrow will shine brighter still. Will better times come? I believe they will." 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conker Posted May 15, 2012 Share Posted May 15, 2012 I like it, nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted May 15, 2012 Author Share Posted May 15, 2012 Thanks. Here's another one. ________________________________ Title: Please Trust Me "Please trust me. Hold me tight. Don't let go. Don't lose sight. And when you stumble, don't give up. Do what's right. And when you're troubled. Do not fear. I'll be there. So don't feel down when I'm not around. Cuz remember... No matter what, I'll always be with you." 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted June 27, 2012 Author Share Posted June 27, 2012 I'm sitting here in a valley of stone. Sitting in this empty valley, all alone. Sitting here watching as I turn into dust. Waiting for me to spontaneously combust. Whenever somebody happens to walk by, they give me a bullet and hope that I die. So I sit here, stained with my own blood. Waiting to be carried away by the high waters and floods. I'm spotted with holes all over my chest. Life would be better if I were just laid to rest. Now I lay here, torn into pieces. As time moves on and life never ceases. My bones still lie here under the sun. The world is much happier, for my life is now done. I am now the dust of the world, with no proper grave. There isn't anything left of me, not a piece was saved. I now know that my purpose in life was to sit there and cry. For me to sit there alone, till the day that I died. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsynk Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 That last one was like an dark poem to me. I hope you understand me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted June 30, 2012 Author Share Posted June 30, 2012 Yeah sorry, it was pretty dark. I just write off of my emotion and what I'm feeling at the time. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsynk Posted July 5, 2012 Share Posted July 5, 2012 Yeah sorry, it was pretty dark. I just write off of my emotion and what I'm feeling at the time. Understandable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted July 6, 2012 Author Share Posted July 6, 2012 There is nothing in my sight. Only the darkness which closes in tight. Darkness covers every inch of me. I feel like I'm drowning in the sea. I won't go down without a fight. But it's hard to win when you're darker than night. The darkness beats me into the ground. I cannot move or make a sound. I trip and stumble everyday. It's like the darkness is on parade. It may be triumphant at the start. But I will never let it have my heart. Its whips and lashes hurt like hell. Does it want my soul? I can't tell. My heart is weak, it's giving in. It looks as if this may be my end. I'm fading down into the deep. As if I'm drifting into sleep. I hear a voice come from within. Could it be real or is it just pretend? My mind is twisted in a bend. I have no heart, I have no friends. My body is an empty shell. A vessel made to rot in hell. The voice comes back, and calls my name. He says that He will take my blame. There a light formed inside the dark, the darkest place inside my heart. The light begins to grow, glimmer, and shine. This light is warm, and it is mine. Overwhelming joy sprouts from within. It's the feeling of love, and I can't hold it in. I must tell my family, my neighbors, and friends. Jesus is the only way to win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsynk Posted July 7, 2012 Share Posted July 7, 2012 Nice Poem, C-force. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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