Pinkie Pie Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 You read the title! Point out the flaws and make me a better artist, people! I made a goddamn promise to my future husband.. So help me! ^ I worked my heart out on this, although I do wish I did a better job on the energy ball values and the fire... But I'm sure you all see other flaws in this..so point out the flaws! ^ Ngh..those arms..sickening...and hands...aauugh... those feathers and stuff could be better shaded! but... since there are people -far- better than me here, the rest of the flaws must be pointed out! ^ Ugh...those shoulders...argh..that horribly lighted hair that looks like a bald spot...but..there must be more that I can improve on..come on.. point out the flaws! ^ BODY UNDER RECONSTRUCTION because the flaws were too obvious....but how does it look so far!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conker Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 It all looks good to me, but yes, there are the flaws you pointed out, plus more. When I have more time, I'll gladly tell you all of them I've found. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkie Pie Posted October 25, 2011 Author Share Posted October 25, 2011 It all looks good to me, but yes, there are the flaws you pointed out, plus more. When I have more time, I'll gladly tell you all of them I've found. Alright I'll wait patiently! (LIE) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tell-Tale Heart Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 Fire should look more like this in my opinion: Or this: As for wings: Or, if you want to be simple, this: Now, what I suggest is that you get a journal/sketchbook (a small one), find good anime pics and poses, and print them out and put them in the sketchbook. That's how I improve often. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mellow Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 ^ Ugh...those shoulders...argh..that horribly lighted hair that looks like a bald spot...but..there must be more that I can improve on..come on.. point out the flaws! His collar bone could also be improved upon, and especially that scar or whatever is in that neck area... the way you drew the scar makes it look like its his collar bone, until you look at it to the point where you see the real collar bone. So, make those scars more... obviously scar-like, I guess. And the collar bones themselves should be spread out a little more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conker Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 And on that picture Hellraiser quoted, the evil-looking guy's eyebrows are way too high on his head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkie Pie Posted October 27, 2011 Author Share Posted October 27, 2011 And on that picture Hellraiser quoted, the evil-looking guy's eyebrows are way too high on his head. Thanks thanks! Now point more flaws out so I can redraw these drawings! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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